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No emotions, no life,
No pain, no strife.
Mind blank, without a thought,
Everything gone, thats been taught.
Nothing

Eyes unseeing, nothing clear,
But then again, no fear.
Love and hate, gone away,
A colourful soul, now grey.
Nothing

No sound, deaf to the light,
Deep inside, no wrong or right.
Unfeeling hands, stretched ahead,
A living corpse, that is dead.
Nothing

So here I stand, all alone,
My bleeding heart, turned to stone.
My brittle skin, turned to ice,
On the floor, snaked eyed dice.
The Void
©2006-2009 ~Souless-gods
:iconsouless-gods:

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I have no idea what made me write this but, well, here it is

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:iconslayerstephi:
Wow. This one is great. Very expressive. And the title is perfect for it.

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"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
:iconsouless-gods:
Thankyou :)

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Proud Miscreant of #TheDungeon

To bring about the end, you first have to start at the beginning
:iconslayerstephi:
You're welcome. :D

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"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
:iconemberspaled:
every word was really appropriate. i'm a fan! haha.
:iconsouless-gods:
Hey. Thanks :)

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Proud Miscreant of #TheDungeon

To bring about the end, you first have to start at the beginning
:icontori-margaret:
I love it. the only thing I'd change is some more descriptive words... but I use too many words and then I get poems that take three pages. :(.. yea. good job though.

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now known as ~WorldWar-Tori
:iconsouless-gods:
Thanks :) I'm glad you added some criticism as well =P I'm always open to it.

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Proud Miscreant of #TheDungeon

To bring about the end, you first have to start at the beginning
:iconsouless-gods:
Thanks very much :)

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Proud Miscreant of #TheDungeon

To bring about the end, you first have to start at the beginning

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